The two maps below shows road access to a city hospital in 2017 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where necessary.
the maps illustrate how the road access to city hospital changed in 2010 compared to 2017.
overall, in comparison with 2007, in 2010, significant changes were done. Not only changing location of the parking area but also the new two roundabouts were constructed.
in 2017, both staff and public car parks were located together on the east side of the hospital road. In 2010 the public car park shifted to east part of the Ring road while the staff car park remained at the same place.
Another important changes had been the changing of the bus stop and constructing two new roundabouts giving access to the newly built bus station. The bus stop which was scattered on the both sides of the hospital road converted to a bus station which is now located on the south-east side of the Ring road. Apart from those changes the other roads and construction remained unchanged.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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the maps illustrate how the road access to ...
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... changed in 2010 compared to 2017. overall, in comparison with 2007, in 2010, sign...
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... two roundabouts were constructed. in 2017, both staff and public car parks w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84210526316 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48203378094 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4268160017 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1785360487 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936736294241 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871598426015 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140385850008 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102196432665 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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