Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems
TO what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Living in a foreign country is always going to be a challenge and the language intensifies the problems along with practical problems. I am totally agree with idea and in this essay i will elaborate the idea with examples.
Firstly, someone who migrate to a country where he or she has to communicate in a foreign language can experience an isolation from home. For instance, missing out one's loving ones can create a sense of loneliness.
secondly, the communication problem one has to face is a major issue in a foreign country with different language.
This language barrier can lead to many problems such as finding a good job, or doing high studies successfully. Even though we lean the particular language prior to migrate to such country, we might not be able to use the language as good as a native speaker can. Besides, we will not be able to understand the pronunciation and some words that are unique to the natives.
Next, the cultural problems one has to face is another significant issue. When someone migrate to a country that speak different language, he or she has to deal with an entire different culture, in other words this can be called a cultural shock. For instance, Japan is unique country that has a totally different culture and a difficult language to master. further, Japanese language strictly bond with its culture, so it is extremely difficult to challenging to survive in such country until you get used to it.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that living in a country when we have to speak different language can lead to severe social and other practical problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: surviving
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8731884058 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7518587024 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507246376812 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5300317759 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.461538462 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32630395596 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11317107632 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700046626212 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170377639372 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497252127029 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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