writing a letter to complaint about a holiday.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my disappointment with the quality of service from your company. I booked online a package tour on the website of your company but unfortunately, the adventure holiday did not live up to my expectations and did not reflect the description on your advertisement.
According to your advertisement, you claimed that there would be a variety of activities every day for me to choose. However, in reality, there was merely a choice of two. On 8 days, neither windsurfing nor sailing was offered and the other guests feeling extremely dissatisfied in terms of organizing activities.
Furthermore, we were thoroughly disgusted with the fact that the three-day camping expedition completely failed. Despite of having rain, the expedition would be still successful if your company had some backup plans.
Another complaint concerns the hotel services which were not what I had been led to expect from your brochure. Instead of staying in comfortable hotel with remarkable facilities, I was put in a youth hostel which was far away from the Wild side Hall. That was seven miles away and we had no transport. To make the matter worse, the facilities at hostel were equally disappointing with table tennis and a pack of card without swimming pool, library as on your advertisement.
In addition, the quality of food was very unsatisfactory. I must express my concern about the fact that the variety of food offered by the restaurant was very low.
I feel strongly that the description of the advertisement on your website should be changed as it totally inaccurate and misleading. I would very much like to hear from your reactions to all this, and I expect receiving an apology and substantial refund from your company.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Jennifer Clara.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing this letter to express my d...
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...e was merely a choice of two. On 8 days, neither windsurfing nor sailing was offe...
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...offered by the restaurant was very low. I feel strongly that the description of ...
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...s it totally inaccurate and misleading. I would very much like to hear from your ...
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... substantial refund from your company. I look forward to hearing from you soon. ...
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...earing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Jennifer Clara.
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...n. Yours faithfully, Jennifer Clara.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 5.60731707317 642% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 965.302439024 160% => OK
No of words: 305.0 196.424390244 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07868852459 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00381554368 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 106.607317073 170% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593442622951 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 283.868780488 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9999615532 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1176470588 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 5.23603664747 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0704822134338 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.01821718011 0.103423049105 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361891147382 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0285164719408 0.15604864568 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432298391682 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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