You are going away to travel for the summer A friend will be looking after your house while you are away Write a letter to your friend In your letter say where you are going describe your house explain some of the things your friend must do to look after

Dear friend,

Thank you in advance for looking after my house and my beloved dogs in my absence. I am excited to travel to Canada. It is a dream come true for me.

I just want to let you know few things you need to take care of. The water in tank lasts for 12 hours so you need to reinforce the supply every evening. In the garden area renovation work is in progress so you can not access it for few days. The garage opens from inside. An automation button is placed just under the stairs to open it.

I need to mention a couple of things which you must do in case you step out of the house. There is a burglar alarm in the kitchen so please turn it on before leaving premises. The code to switch it off is 0729. I would be grateful if you feed my dogs on daily basis.

Last but not the least, in case of any emergency please feel free to contact me at my hotel number 042467821. I owe a treat to you for this help.

Thank you once again for your generosity.

Yours faithfully,
Maninder

Votes
Average: 5.8 (4 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear friend, Thank you in advance for looking after m...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'you know']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228971962617 0.268076937826 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.14953271028 0.116061578633 129% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0560747663551 0.0759168565197 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0373831775701 0.0366838410393 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.130841121495 0.0131127313244 998% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135514018692 0.155750635184 87% => OK
Participles: 0.018691588785 0.0379272487307 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.12011130094 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0467289719626 0.0210936926555 222% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00467289719626 0.00175180941692 267% => OK
Determiners: 0.0794392523364 0.0948980150116 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0140186915888 0.00437022459523 321% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00467289719626 0.00967000014798 48% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1001.0 1161.00487805 86% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.9 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10714285714 5.90752243213 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.224489795918 0.337110787985 67% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.127551020408 0.247514529752 52% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0663265306122 0.171178102325 39% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0408163265306 0.112407865282 36% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.12011130094 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637755102041 0.546246751206 117% => OK
Word variations: 64.5382548739 49.3433353143 131% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 8.93414634146 179% => OK
Sentence length: 12.25 23.0094962315 53% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6515709319 42.9750493124 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5625 135.714022679 46% => More chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.25 23.0094962315 53% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.3125 0.689975730869 45% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 25.0051020408 47.7609492067 52% => OK
Elegance: 1.20588235294 2.94281807926 41% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348625062269 0.418131533498 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0571773664348 0.181151798455 32% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0610813672826 0.0850326197045 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.523614611124 0.706616315825 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188125031557 0.157042692854 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116050282512 0.228904883108 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737435919359 0.108899403657 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.231938176594 0.367819155151 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.115853267267 0.0812612215331 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196127608917 0.316326947829 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309401970983 0.0921553760075 34% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70731707317 297% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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