Dear Mr. Hudson,
My name is Sudheerkumar Reddy Motakatla, and I have enrolled for an eight-week intensive programming course in Oxford House College. My company is paying for my tuition and I’m using my summer vacation to study my course. It is expected that, I will be more proficient in computer programming courses after the course. Therefore, it is rather important for me to study in the best environment.
I am staying in Phoenix Hostel on Campus. While my room is pleasant, near to my classroom and the facilities are very good, the hostel is extremely noisy. I was that, I would be staying with only postgraduates or intensive course students. However, most of the people are doing summer school course because of the academic failure and all are under 22. It seems to be they are enjoying one long time party. It is very noisy and I can’t concentrate on my studies.
As you promised, I wonder if you could you move me into some other hostel, which is more conducive to serious study. Otherwise, I may use the remainder of my accommodation fee to go towards payment for a hotel.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Sudheerkumar Reddy Motakatla
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 5.60731707317 589% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83823529412 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85788517778 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642156862745 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 1.53170731707 914% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2671406751 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125372999007 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415713647079 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370065315404 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0516280028653 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297628006282 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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