You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates, how many times every week, for a total of five weeks three computer programs were saved from the website. The units used are in thousands.
Overall, it is clear from the graph that the internet program Active X showed an upward trend with slight fluctuations. Additionally, the Net showed a downward trend initially, which later turned into an opposite trend. The Java program experienced a continuous upward trend throughout the given period. However, the most downloaded program was Active X, whereas the Net was the least for a period of five weeks.
On the one hand, the Active X showed a steady incline in downloads from week 1 to week 3 starting from about 70 thousand to approximately 90 thousand. In week 3 it reached to around 100 thousand logins by people. Focusing on week 4, a decline was noted in downloads which brought the level at the same value as in week 2 (about 90 thousand). Looking at week 5, a rise was experienced in a loading of the package by internet users reaching up to approximately 121 thousand.
On the other hand, internet program named the Net showed a continuous decrease from week 1 to week 3. Furthermore, the number of times this program ran started from about 35 thousand in week 1 to around 25 thousand in week 2. Finally, it declined to approximately 10 thousand downloads in week 3. Focusing on week 4, significant growth was observed, reaching the login to 40 thousand and in week 5 to about 50 thousand. Regarding the Java program, it demonstrated a steady incline from week 1 at about 45 thousand downloads till week 5 approximately 81 thousand downloads.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a steady incline in downloads from week 1 to week 3 starting from about 70 thous...
^^
Line 4, column 360, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...gnificant growth was observed, reaching the login to 40 thousand and in week 5 to about 5...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, look, regarding, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 283.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76325088339 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87374103632 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 106.607317073 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501766784452 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.54426046 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8666666667 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218580221434 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875177057989 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635054159159 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152005937118 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538708083726 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.