The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the schematic representation of the process by which Salmon completes its life cycle.
Overall, it is clear from the diagram that the life cycle is completed in 3 stages. In the beginning, it starts with laying of eggs under small stones present at the base of reeds in moving upper river. Finally, in approximately 5 years’ time they turn into adult salmons swimming freely in open sea. Hence, the life cycle takes about nine and a half years to complete.
Firstly, large Salmon fish lays eggs hidden from predators beneath the stones among the reeds. This process takes approximately 5 to 6 months in slow moving upper river. This is followed by, eggs hatching to release ‘fry’ that are 3 to 8 cm long. These fishes swim and later grow into ‘smolt’ that are 12 to 15 cm in the fast-flowing lower river bank. This process takes approximately 4 years to complete.
Finally, these smolts are washed into open sea, where they mature to become an ‘adult salmon’ of 70 to 76 cm. This stage takes approximately 5 years to occur. Next, the life cycle is repeated again with same stage sequence.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeated'.
Suggestion: repeated
...years to occur. Next, the life cycle is repeated again with same stage sequence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, hence, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91282051282 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89278046691 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610256410256 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5746328415 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.6923076923 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113233169525 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045338641214 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450793762503 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770415321951 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189628383596 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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