You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You shoul

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Submitted by Kubraguran on Wed, 10/13/2021 - 11:30

The illustrated is show to monthly temperatures and rains by monthly in settlement of Kolkata.In the graphic each month and each quantity of rain demonstrated by separated.

First of all, according to chart amount of precipitation and monthly temperature are going to opposite. In june, july, august and september are highly raised as a precipitation.Average rainfall is approximately 300mm in this 4 months.And may and october just coming after this months.In this four months also have averagely 30 C in the season.

Rest of the other months have less rainy days and still have high temperature.Thus, in this seasons can be expect the drought.The nearly precipitation is almost less than 50 mm totally.And the other hands, temperature still between 20 and 25 degrees.

Overall, high temperature and low rainfall can be effect the life as a negative in this city and people who live in Kolkata.Hence,life should be arrange relevant to this city air conditions.

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Average: 6.1 (2 votes)
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ins by monthly in settlement of Kolkata.In the graphic each month and each quantit...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Average
...er are highly raised as a precipitation.Average rainfall is approximately 300mm in this...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...is approximately 300mm in this 4 months.And may and october just coming after this ...
^^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s.And may and october just coming after this months.In this four months also have av...
^^^^
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...d october just coming after this months.In this four months also have averagely 30...
^^
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...ny days and still have high temperature.Thus, in this seasons can be expect the drou...
^^^^
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nd still have high temperature.Thus, in this seasons can be expect the drought.The n...
^^^^
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... this seasons can be expect the drought.The nearly precipitation is almost less tha...
^^^
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...ation is almost less than 50 mm totally.And the other hands, temperature still betw...
^^^
Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...his city and people who live in Kolkata.Hence,life should be arrange relevant to this...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , life
...ity and people who live in Kolkata.Hence,life should be arrange relevant to this city...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'arranged'?
Suggestion: arranged
...ho live in Kolkata.Hence,life should be arrange relevant to this city air conditions.
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, so, still, thus, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26451612903 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46928847734 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638709677419 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7082536231 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.2 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 5.23603664747 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205725323956 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105842827581 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423255709797 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120774373377 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407209729844 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.2329268293 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ins by monthly in settlement of Kolkata.In the graphic each month and each quantit...
^^
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Average
...er are highly raised as a precipitation.Average rainfall is approximately 300mm in this...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...is approximately 300mm in this 4 months.And may and october just coming after this ...
^^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s.And may and october just coming after this months.In this four months also have av...
^^^^
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...d october just coming after this months.In this four months also have averagely 30...
^^
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...ny days and still have high temperature.Thus, in this seasons can be expect the drou...
^^^^
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...nd still have high temperature.Thus, in this seasons can be expect the drought.The n...
^^^^
Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
... this seasons can be expect the drought.The nearly precipitation is almost less tha...
^^^
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...ation is almost less than 50 mm totally.And the other hands, temperature still betw...
^^^
Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...his city and people who live in Kolkata.Hence,life should be arrange relevant to this...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , life
...ity and people who live in Kolkata.Hence,life should be arrange relevant to this city...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'arranged'?
Suggestion: arranged
...ho live in Kolkata.Hence,life should be arrange relevant to this city air conditions.
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, may, so, still, thus, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26451612903 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46928847734 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638709677419 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7082536231 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.2 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 5.23603664747 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205725323956 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105842827581 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423255709797 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120774373377 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407209729844 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.2329268293 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.