You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children

Essay topics:

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.

Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 254 words.

Submitted by Kubraguran on Mon, 10/11/2021 - 03:54

The educated the children could be more diffucult and unpredictable for parents and teachers.And especially the schools are very vital when growing and educating the enfants.But there is a distinct about homeworks how effect child improvement?Some of people believe is not able to help to children when they already going to school regulary and the other believes the opposite way.

First of all,same partf of parents are not supporting the homework after school.According to this people, the children shoul have free time when they get back from their school.In this time they can be able to relax after bussy day in school with games or friends.And this games are improves their logic development.Intense scholl life can be became boring and annoying for student.

And the other hands, rest of the parents says after education in scholl enfants should be repeat in home.With this way they can be success in school and with this accomplishment in the future time their became more efficent and beneficial individuals for society.

According to two opposite opionion, they can be right for their views.Both parents and theacher want to educated, brilliant and happy children in the community.They try make the best what they know.Hence, I think the two sides of views can be right in suffiecent doese.When the student came back to scholl they should give a break time for their mental healhty.In this time they can play with their friend or can sleep if they want.But End of the this free time they should know their responsibilty for school.They should be awareness relevant their academic life.

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Average: 5.6 (2 votes)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: And
... unpredictable for parents and teachers.And especially the schools are very vital w...
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... when growing and educating the enfants.But there is a distinct about homeworks how...
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Suggestion: Some
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Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the people') or simply say ''Some people''.
Suggestion: Some of the people; Some people
... homeworks how effect child improvement?Some of people believe is not able to help to children...
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Suggestion: According
...ot supporting the homework after school.According to this people, the children shoul have...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... the homework after school.According to this people, the children shoul have free ti...
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...me when they get back from their school.In this time they can be able to relax aft...
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Suggestion: And
...ssy day in school with games or friends.And this games are improves their logic dev...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Intense
...es are improves their logic development.Intense scholl life can be became boring and an...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'repeated'?
Suggestion: repeated
...r education in scholl enfants should be repeat in home.With this way they can be succe...
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...scholl enfants should be repeat in home.With this way they can be success in school ...
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...nion, they can be right for their views.Both parents and theacher want to educated, ...
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...ant and happy children in the community.They try make the best what they know.Hence,...
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...y.They try make the best what they know.Hence, I think the two sides of views can be ...
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Suggestion: When
... views can be right in suffiecent doese.When the student came back to scholl they sh...
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Suggestion: In
...e a break time for their mental healhty.In this time they can play with their frie...
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Suggestion: But
... their friend or can sleep if they want.But End of the this free time they should k...
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Line 7, column 444, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...nd or can sleep if they want.But End of the this free time they should know their respon...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 511, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...uld know their responsibilty for school.They should be awareness relevant their acad...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, i think, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12977099237 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88332443819 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534351145038 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.61621625 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 336.0 106.682146367 315% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.5 20.7667163134 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235776038124 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166980980018 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482499215928 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166980980018 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482499215928 0.056905535591 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.5 13.0946893788 271% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
... unpredictable for parents and teachers.And especially the schools are very vital w...
^^^
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
... when growing and educating the enfants.But there is a distinct about homeworks how...
^^^
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
... homeworks how effect child improvement?Some of people believe is not able to help t...
^^^^
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Some of', you should use 'the' ('Some of the people') or simply say ''Some people''.
Suggestion: Some of the people; Some people
... homeworks how effect child improvement?Some of people believe is not able to help to children...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , same
...lieves the opposite way. First of all,same partf of parents are not supporting the...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: According
...ot supporting the homework after school.According to this people, the children shoul have...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... the homework after school.According to this people, the children shoul have free ti...
^^^^
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...me when they get back from their school.In this time they can be able to relax aft...
^^
Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...ssy day in school with games or friends.And this games are improves their logic dev...
^^^
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Intense
...es are improves their logic development.Intense scholl life can be became boring and an...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'repeated'?
Suggestion: repeated
...r education in scholl enfants should be repeat in home.With this way they can be succe...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...scholl enfants should be repeat in home.With this way they can be success in school ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Both
...nion, they can be right for their views.Both parents and theacher want to educated, ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ant and happy children in the community.They try make the best what they know.Hence,...
^^^^
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...y.They try make the best what they know.Hence, I think the two sides of views can be ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: When
... views can be right in suffiecent doese.When the student came back to scholl they sh...
^^^^
Line 7, column 362, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...e a break time for their mental healhty.In this time they can play with their frie...
^^
Line 7, column 433, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
... their friend or can sleep if they want.But End of the this free time they should k...
^^^
Line 7, column 444, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...nd or can sleep if they want.But End of the this free time they should know their respon...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 511, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...uld know their responsibilty for school.They should be awareness relevant their acad...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, i think, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12977099237 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88332443819 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534351145038 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.61621625 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 336.0 106.682146367 315% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.5 20.7667163134 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235776038124 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166980980018 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482499215928 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166980980018 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482499215928 0.056905535591 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.5 13.0946893788 271% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.66 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.