The line graph indicates the closures and the openings of shops in one nation from 2011 and 2018.
Overall, it is clear that both closed and opened shops saw downward trends from 2011 to 2018. Furthermore, there were big gaps in the two figures during the given period of time.
Regarding the number of closed shops, starting at the peak of around 8,500 shops in 2011, the figure witnessed a dip to under 4,000 shops in 2012. After that, it incresed significantly to more than 6,000 shops in 2014. During the same period of time, that of new shops fluctuated between 6,000 shops and over 7,000 shops.
Between 2014 and 2015, there was a sharp decreae in shop closures from 6,500 shops to its lowest at around 500 shops. Then, the figure rocketed to over 5,000 shops and remain the same untill 2018. The figure for closed shops also underwent a considerable fall to 4,000 shops in 2015 and it had levelled off before continuing to decrease to 3,000 shops in 2018.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...aps in the two figures during the given period of time. Regarding the number of closed shop...
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...an 6,000 shops in 2014. During the same period of time, that of new shops fluctuated between 6...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66279069767 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18592280699 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3030146344 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1111111111 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261921969311 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127643594139 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666587529599 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182212061338 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381842350318 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.