You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
• say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
• explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
• suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
I was so happy to receive your letter, and I am glad to hear that you and your family are doing well. The reason that I am writing this letter is that you specifically asked for my opinion regarding your future plans. I feel that you should get a job rather than go to college.
First and foremost, in today’s job market, companies are interested in hiring young people with experience. In most cases, it doesn’t matter whether you earned your degrees from a regular college or via distance education. Therefore, it is a mere waste of time if you choose to attend college on a regular basis.
Instead, you should consider a decent job you are interested in. After three years, you will have gained some valuable working experience. Also, if you are really keen on pursuing higher education, you can opt for a distance education programme.
My suggestion would be to join an IT company as a fresher. As you know, demand in this industry is always rising. Moreover, I have some friends who are working as human resources representatives. If you want, I will contact them for any such vacancy. I hope you find my suggestions valuable.
I wish you all the best for your future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...gramme. My suggestion would be to join an IT company as a fresher. As you know, dema...
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Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
.... My suggestion would be to join an IT company as a fresher. As you know, demand in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, therefore, well, i feel, you know, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 5.60731707317 713% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66507177033 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67128805233 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641148325359 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 1.53170731707 783% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1163209932 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9333333333 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384073158304 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122994031406 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764971099193 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201219256365 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891314965467 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.