You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where rele

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The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart compares the amount of electricity produced and consumed in the top ten countries in 2014.

Overall, electricity was produced enough for consumption in each country, and China and the US were the leading producers and consumers of electricity in the world.

The biggest producer and consumer of electricity, China, produced and consumed around 5400 billion kWh of electricity in 2014. With a production and consumption of around 4000, the US was the second largest producer and consumer globally. The amount of electricity produced and consumed in these 2 countries were by far higher than the rest of the world.

The production and consumption of Russia was relatively the same at just over 1000, and this number was slightly higher than that of Japan and India. All other countries generated and used around 500 in 2014. However, Germany was the only that used more electricity than they made, and Korea Republic was the smallest producer and consumer of electricity among these top 10 countries.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15662650602 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76468617046 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493975903614 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0419391587 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150182091681 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868963414222 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629352472111 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128599326658 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709644074506 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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