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The graph describes average house prices in Sometown in 2005.
Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.
Write at least 150 words
Double Line Graph Average House Prices from Target Band 7 book
The given line graph depicts the information about the average house prices of sold and on the market prices. Where the data represents fluctuations in both on the market and sold houses in year 2005 since the month of july to december.
This is clear from the data which shows a steppe decline in the average price of on the market from $340,000 to $330,000 and then $320,000 in the months of July, august and september respectively. However, if we see the prices of sold houses had not shown much of increase but a decrease was little higher as compared to the trend of on the market property with an increase of $500,000 but showed steady decline and dropped upto $290,000. Further more, there was no facts to be presented in the month of september to october in the year 2005 for sold houses, on the contrary there was a huge inclining trend to be observed with the jump of $100,000 in the prices of on the market.By the time of last two months from the data mentioned sold houses gradually showed up with the increase by $150,000 in the same there was sloppy decline on the market.
To sum up, the trend of prices of the property showed a gradual increase in both trends but showed a fluctuation in further few months till december.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...uly, august and september respectively. However if we see the prices of sold houses had...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...crease but a decrease was little higher as compared to the trend of on the market ...
^^
Line 5, column 668, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...f 00,000 in the prices of on the market.By the time of last two months from the da...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30655105683 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484444444444 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.7843508105 43.030603864 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.0 112.824112599 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5 22.9334400587 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16456371334 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111663878141 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943327840492 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125168886137 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800987199399 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.2329268293 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.3 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.