You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 word

Essay topics:

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

<span style="font-size: 19.360000610351563px;">The pie charts illustrated the purposes of migration of the united kingdom in the year 2007.
Overall, the definite job comprised almost the proportion of both transfers, while no reason stated in immigration and formal study in emigration was by far the least. In comparison, the united kingdom was an active country for working according to provided statics.
The labor comes out from the UK to looking for work as twice as the labor comes in, the no reason stated in emigration had a similar figure as three times as the same sector in immigration. In contrast, formal students come to the UK were more than sixfold number of schoolers who comes out in 2007. It also evidenced significantly that UK possessed a profound quality of education.
When it comes to the other, </span>accompany<span style="font-size: 19.360000610351563px;">, and definite job purposes, it </span>had a resemblance<span style="font-size: 19.360000610351563px;"> which accounted for 11%, 15%, and 30% in immigration to 14%, 13%, and 29% respectively during this time.</span><br>

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84939759036 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.06298333607 2.65546596893 191% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626506024096 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.8622540917 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.714285714 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0934066387859 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048071987342 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0205491889773 0.0843802449381 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0606220198571 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254755229401 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.95 11.4140731707 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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