07.10.2017
You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter.
1. Introduce yourself
2. Describe your plans for the party
3. invite your neighbour to come
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to invite you to visit my birthday party.
My name is Eugene, I and my girlfriend recently moved to your calm and beautiful neighborhood. My beloved woman works as a nurse in a hospital and I am an engineer in a local drilling company who has recently was promoted to a new position.
On 2nd March I am going to have a birthday party. There will be a musical band who will play country and rock music. The group is well-known on the local level for its excellent performances.
Moreover, more than fifty pizzas and twenty-five boxes of beer have been ordered. So, the celebration may last for several hours and be noisy, I hope that you will let this party happen and it will not you disturb you too much.
I also invite you to participate in the party. This event provides all visitors with indispensable opportunity to make a lot of new acquaintances among local folks. And, I have an intention to stay in this neighborhood for a long period of time and likely to start my own family. So, becoming friends with my neighbors is another reason to invite you.
I hope you accept my invitation.
Sincerely yours,
Comments
Essay evaluation report
I and my girlfriend
my girlfriend and I
I am an engineer in a local drilling company who has recently was promoted to a new position.
I am an engineer in a local drilling company and has recently promoted to a new position. //something before 'who' should be people
and it will not you disturb you too much.
and it will not disturb you too much.
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2 //double check grammar issues after essay writing
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 207 250
No. of Characters: 906 1200
No. of Different Words: 130 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.793 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.377 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.662 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 51 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 40 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 13.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.884 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.267 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.331 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.653 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.136 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Yes, It covers the topic. The
Yes, It covers the topic. The main issue is grammar. Every grammar error is serious.
Here goes one good sample:
https://www.testbig.com/ielts-writing-task-i-ielts-general-training-ess…
Another question.
Another question.
I was told that I need to make the theme of my letters clear from the very beginning.
Should I do it?
I am an engineer in a local
I am an engineer in a local drilling company who has recently was promoted to a new position.
I am an engineer in a local drilling company and has recently promoted to a new position. //something before 'who' should be people
who refers to "I". It appears that my mistake was who has been recently promoted. Passive voice.
I and my girlfriend
my girlfriend and I
I do not know this rule. Can you explain me it?
Thank you.
It is the convention in
It is the convention in English that when you list several people including yourself, you put yourself last.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...local drilling company who has recently was promoted to a new position. On 2nd ...
^^^
Line 10, column 231, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...to stay in this neighborhood for a long period of time and likely to start my own family. So, ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6038647343 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73433365746 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8440004142 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3076923077 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137734156627 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454642128746 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362391434752 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667823985912 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215253248389 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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