People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Some scientists have averted that stress has become one of the main characteristics of the modern society. In fact, the pace of our lives has increased tremendously, the flow of information which we face on regular basis in immense. In other words, stress is an unavoidable part of our everyday existence in contemporary society. As a result, each of us has to answer on a simple question how to handle the mundane stress. My answer on this question will be given below with support and examples.
Firstly, participation to sport activities is a fabulous way to relief stress. Any sport requires from a person who participates to it being attentive, careful and focused on the activity. A person who has faced a bunch of stressful situations during a day is able to switch one's attention on a new activity. For example, a body builder pays attention to muscles which he or she tries to work out; a soccer player has to focus full attention on the game as well. As a result, a person after a workout feels relaxed and calm.
The second way to handle stress is to go to a psychologist who will help you relax with a therapy or you can visit a priest to whom you can talk to about your problems. In both cases, your prospect on a stressful problem will be altered. For instance, when my grandmother died, I was deeply upset and couldn't find peace with myself. In my family we have a tradition regularly visit a local Christian church, after a short but sincere conversation with the priest, my viewpoint of the relative's death changed and found calmness; the stress has been alleviated.
Finally, stress is often seen as unquestionable evil, however, this point of view is doubtful. sometimes the best way to reduce stress is to face it. by learning how to have a deal with stress, it may be conquered. In fact, each of us has this kind of experience, for instance, if you have a conflict with your girlfriend or wife, it may not be wise to try to escape the difficulties. It is much more reasonable to bravely and wisely work with it. In this case, we may address the root of the problem and solve it completely.
To wrap up, there are many ways to handle stress such as participation to sport activity or visiting a psychologist but probably the best way to do it is to have a deal with the cause of your stress.
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Essay evaluation report
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The introduction is wordy, look:
As a result, each of us has to answer on a simple question how to handle the mundane stress. My answer on this question will be given below with support and examples.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 420 350
No. of Characters: 1845 1500
No. of Different Words: 223 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.527 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.393 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.676 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 121 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.105 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.765 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.684 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.289 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.517 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.129 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...randmother died, I was deeply upset and couldnt find peace with myself. In my family we...
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Line 5, column 485, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'relatives'' or 'relative's'?
Suggestion: relatives'; relative's
...on with the priest, my viewpoint of the relatives death changed and found calmness; the s...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sometimes
...owever, this point of view is doubtful. sometimes the best way to reduce stress is to fac...
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Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ticipation to sport activity or visiting a psychologist but probably the best way...
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Line 9, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st but probably the best way to do it is to have a deal with the cause of your st...
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Discourse Markers used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223655913978 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.161290322581 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0645161290323 0.0866891130778 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0365591397849 0.046263068375 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0666666666667 0.0685040099705 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111827956989 0.118717715034 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0344086021505 0.0351676179071 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7724870424 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0537634408602 0.0309702414327 174% => OK
Particles: 0.00430107526882 0.00188951952338 228% => OK
Determiners: 0.109677419355 0.0887237588012 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0172043010753 0.0209618222197 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0193548387097 0.0139019557991 139% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2324.0 2387.08602151 97% => OK
No of words: 419.0 408.028673835 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54653937947 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.293556085919 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217183770883 0.251872472559 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152744630072 0.174417080927 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107398568019 0.112833075102 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7724870424 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522673031026 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 59.1573722851 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9523809524 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5737880153 48.84282405 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 120.699889404 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9523809524 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.644075263715 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 41.6707580407 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.39837398374 1.45489161554 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303197990845 0.300154397459 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104473524609 0.103427244359 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0688286332696 0.0752933317313 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.496233974726 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165127321513 0.151897553556 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114306148877 0.114077575197 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750733498583 0.0781384742642 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.322415572915 0.336927656856 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0854984128615 0.067059652881 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2053343194 0.210909579961 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865038756971 0.0618886996521 140% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.86379928315 285% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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