People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Stress is omnipresent in everybody’s life and we all managed it differently. To escape stress, you can find many solutions, some people read while some work out and other tend to their gardens. I believe that both exercising and reading help reduce stress. Reading makes you escape reality while exercising makes you releases a chemical hormone that keeps you happy.
Firstly, reading fictional novels is a great way to escape reality for a moment. You can focus on being a part of another universe, even a fictional one. Body and mind can then relax and let go of the tension. Moreover, if you are enjoying the book you’ll spend a wonderful time by yourself and you’ll be happy. For example, I am currently reading a fictional book called The labyrinth of the spirits. This book helps me get out of my own head by telling the story of a spy in a post- World War II Spain.
However, if you are not a book lover, exercise is a good way as well to reduce stress. If you do something you love, you’ll always be happier and you’ll escape the stress of modern life. Another reason is that practicing a physical activity makes you release endorphins which are chemicals produced by the brain and the spinal chord, also called the happiness hormones. It has been scientifically proven that when your body produces these chemicals you’ll feel more relaxed and happier. For instance, one of my roommates goes to the gym almost everyday and everytime she is coming back home she seems brighter. She looks like she has a whole new energy inside her, even when she is dealing with stressful exam.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'release'
Suggestion: release
...cape reality while exercising makes you releases a chemical hormone that keeps you happy...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: SPINAL_CHORD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spinal cord'?
Suggestion: spinal cord
...chemicals produced by the brain and the spinal chord, also called the happiness hormones. It...
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Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... of my roommates goes to the gym almost everyday and everytime she is coming back home s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 52.1666666667 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 280.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78928571429 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67726396662 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1209090475 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8125 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264469862555 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888251560218 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936222905172 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189718346597 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100430258611 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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