If you were an employer, which kind of worker would you prefer to hire: an inexperienced worker at a lower salary or an experienced worker at a higher salary? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Being an employer seems to be difficult; you have to choose the right person for the job just by knowing her with a Curriculum vitae and an interview. Most of the time, employers struggle to make a choice between hiring an inexperienced worker at a lower salary or hiring an experienced worker but at a higher salary. If I was an employer, I would prefer to hire an inexperienced worker at a lower salary because you can give a chance to inexperienced people and raise the salary if you are satisfied afterwards.
Firstly, it is hard to find a place in the job’s market if you do not have an experience in the field you are looking for. To me, not having an experience does not mean that you are not capable of doing the work. I would like to give a chance to someone who is determined even if the person never worked at this field or position before. For example, when I was looking for student’s jobs during college, most employers refused me because I did not have a specific experience such as making coffee or customer services knowledge. I certainly did not have the experience, but I really wanted to learn. That why I’m more open to accept people who do not have experience because I know that you can learn if you are motivated.
Secondly, hiring someone inexperienced with a lower salary allows you as an employer to raise her salary if you are happy with her work. For instance, I realised that sometimes experience mean nothing, and some experienced workers are high paid without doing correctly their jobs. In consequence, I think that it is safer to begin with an inexperienced worker with a low salary because you can still judge their ability and increase their salary.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, i think, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65231788079 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76970277355 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486754966887 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.0195741538 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.083333333 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434285791064 0.236089414692 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1743812507 0.076458572812 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164854091714 0.0737576698707 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329619193219 0.150856017488 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.185672158184 0.0645574589148 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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