Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is nothing that young people can teach older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
In the absolute, we can all learn from each other because of our own individual diversity, we all have something to give and to take. Some people say that young people have nothing to teach to older people while others say the opposite. I believe that old people do not need to learn lessons from younger people, because old persons have been young, and they have more wisdom than young people.
In the first place, even if we do not want to believe it, old people were not always this age. However, they may be not on point with the new technology, but they have been young before, like everybody else, so they know about young adult’s life big patterns. Life existencial questions, traps, drugs, parties, relationships, work, elderly people have been trough all or more of these steps and they have made mistakes too. For instance, some young people think that they can teach older people about drugs, but I think it is false. In fact, if old people have been taking drugs when they were young they know the feeling, the addiction, the struggle. And they have distance about their experiences.
Secondly, in my opinion, old people have more wisdom than young adults, due to their numerous years of experiences. Indeed, they have more distance with life, with our society. Young people are all about the present, they do not have the time to stop and really think about their life, because they have to construct their future. Nevertheless, elderly people are not anymore into this rush so they have a better vision about the big picture. For example, some young people think that the goal in life is earning a lot of money. But, when you listen to old people, most of them will say to you that relationships should be your main goals in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67637540453 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26099438305 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495145631068 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6311356377 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3333333333 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 5.45110844103 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177954046224 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772011824191 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568457222258 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14504662859 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028250914215 0.0645574589148 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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