Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is nothing that young people can teach older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position
The belief that there is nothing that elder people can learn from the kids sounds a controversial topic to me. Nowadays, technology has taken the world by storm. Almost everything we use involves an electronic gadget. The habits of people have changed significantly the way it used to be back then. The young generation has been exposed with the technology for a longer period than the elder people. There is a certain group of people who believes that there is nothing these kids can teach to elder people. I totally disagree with this belief and would rather elucidate my stand in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, kids these days get to interact with the technological gadgets from a very early age. The things taught to the adolescents on the books are rather being replaced by tablets (electronic gadget used these days in replacement of computers).This is the sole reason they become interested a lot in getting hands off experience with these emerging technologies which consequently proves to be beneficial for the brain building for the kids. This exhibits my obvious inclination that kids nowadays are smarter and more intelligent than the elder people.
Secondly, according to the recent research conducted by a famous company, Millers Group, kids specifically of the age group 4-10 are fast learners than the people of elder age. This can be due to the reason the way they are exposed to new technologies which they further try to explore on their own. This problem solving and self-exploring technique in return enhances the “Egnelobe”, the right-corner of the brain which helps in problem solving at a later stage. This can be an obvious reason why kids have more to offer to adults than the other way around.
On my recent trip to home, I saw a thing which was kind of eye opener for me. My 4 years old niece teaching my mom how to use iPad and laptop. For instance, connecting iPad to internet and making notes etc. I was really amazed to see how fast the kids learn these days.
What is half full to some may appear half empty to others. There still exists a large majority of people who think that adults are more experienced, and they have much more to teach to the young kids than the kids to the elder people. There can be some extremely complex topics which are grasp by the elder people more quickly than the kids. This can be because they possess much more experience than the kids.
As far as I am concerned, I would say that learning has no age. The young talent we have is much adept than the elder people. If together this exchange of knowledge continues, it can surely play a vital role to make this earth a better place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, then, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73233404711 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64047664032 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490364025696 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9619684722 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.68 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.12 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162894431404 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490458374456 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445101852904 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087997480434 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606474764789 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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