People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
In this world, many people dwell who have different wishes to pursue. Such people fall in two categories, one who use logic in decision making and others who just rely on emotions. Off course, those decisions can be either for temporary entertainment or for permanent better effects. But the people who make decisions emotionally for temporary comforts are poor decision makers.
People spend money extravagantly even having very small amount, keeping in mind that they have to give their children a better life. It can be justified by taking an example of a person who purchases a home by investing all the money he/she has. The emotion concerned with such step is that he/she can give comfortable life to his children. The logic that works in their mind is that they will be having a fixed asset too. Hence they end up in myopic view of their children betterment by giving them a comfortable place to live. But many of the questions remain unanswered: What about their quality education? Will he/she be able to provide them healthy food along with at expensive home? Will there be any money left for their entertainment? Hence, with these questions remaining unanswered, those people end up making poor decision.
Coming towards the emotions concerned with people's personal life. A person purchases a smart watch costing $300. He makes such decision because he wants to look smart in front of public and the logic that is concerned with them is that they can resale that watch easily. However, if someone uses the watch for 1 year and warranty gets expired then it is easily depreciated for half of its value and that person end up selling that watch for $150. Now, if that person purchases the simple $10 watch with no intention of reselling, then he will be facing loss of just $10 compared to that $150 loss.
Moving on towards another emotional action related to person, that he/she wants to travel in business class of airplane keeping in view that he will be considered royal in the society. Logic that is associated is that he/she will not be tired for say 12 hours journey that is faced by travelling in economy class. But once after reaching destination, that person has weekend available for rest. Then it is quite foolish to travel by upper class by wasting 4 times more money.
On the other side, if a person makes emotional decisions for permanent better results, it comes out to be reasonable decision. Lets consider an example of parents giving quality education to their children by taking loans from banks. Undoubtedly, the emotion is totally concerned with betterment of their children and logic is concerned with their better earning in future. Such decisions will help them being role model for their children as well as for society.
Therefore, we can conclude that the decisions that are made emotionally keeping in view its permanent better effects are best decisions in contrast to the decisions that are made emotionally just for temporary comforts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... they will be having a fixed asset too. Hence they end up in myopic view of their chi...
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Line 2, column 622, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...ut their quality education? Will he/she be able to provide them healthy food along...
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Line 3, column 562, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'compared' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'compares'.
Suggestion: compares
..., then he will be facing loss of just 0 compared to that 50 loss. Moving on towards ano...
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Line 4, column 367, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'weekended'.
Suggestion: weekended
...r reaching destination, that person has weekend available for rest. Then it is quite fo...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...it comes out to be reasonable decision. Lets consider an example of parents giving q...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... is concerned with their better earning in future. Such decisions will help them being ro...
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Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to be' or 'be'.
Suggestion: to be; be
...n future. Such decisions will help them being role model for their children as well a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, as for, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2467.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 505.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88514851485 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53484374286 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485148514851 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 762.3 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2996322149 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3703703704 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7037037037 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295442584439 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922560625979 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12562729905 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189170954119 0.150359130593 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140034564739 0.0667264976115 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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