People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Stress is omnipresent in everybody’s life and we all managed it differently. To escape the stress, you can find many solutions, some people read while some people work out and other tend to work in their gardens. I believe that both exercising and reading help reducing stress’ life for me and my friends. Reading makes you escape life while exercising makes you releases a chemical hormone that keep you happy.
First, reading fiction novels are a great way to escape reality for a moment. You can focus on being a part of another universe, even a fiction one. Body and mind can then relax and put away the tension. Moreover, if you are enjoying the book you spend a wonderful time with yourself and you are happy. For example, I am currently reading a fictional book called The labyrinth of the spirits. This book helps me going out of my own head by telling me the story of a spy in a post- World War II time, in Spain. In fact, I can take some time for me.
Furthermore, if you are not a book lover, exercise is a good way as well to reduce your stress. First, if you do something you love you always be happier and so escaping the stress of modern life. Another point is that practicing a physical activity makes you release endorphins which are chemicals produced by the brain and the spinal chord, their other name is happy hormones. It is scientifically proved that when your body produced these chemicals you feel more relaxed and happier. For instance, one of my roommate go to the gym almost everyday and everytime she is coming back home she seems brighter. She looks like she has a whole new energy inside her, even when she is dealing with exam’s stress.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to reduce' or 'reduce'.
Suggestion: to reduce; reduce
...e that both exercising and reading help reducing stress' life for me and my friends...
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Line 1, column 374, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'release'
Suggestion: release
... escape life while exercising makes you releases a chemical hormone that keep you happy....
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Line 2, column 413, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to go' or 'go'.
Suggestion: to go; go
...inth of the spirits. This book helps me going out of my own head by telling me the st...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...First, if you do something you love you always be happier and so escaping the stress of m...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: SPINAL_CHORD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spinal cord'?
Suggestion: spinal cord
...chemicals produced by the brain and the spinal chord, their other name is happy hormones. It...
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Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...one of my roommate go to the gym almost everyday and everytime she is coming back home s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57755775578 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54527135223 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580858085809 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.141934256 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5882352941 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294301121904 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939246552719 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941305648766 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2068991118 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100810288139 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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