Do you think scientists should be given the freedom to test and experiment however they please, or should they be limited in what they can study? Give reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Scientific experiments are making science’s knowledge progressing day after day. However, opinions about the freedom of scientists is divided in two. Thus who thinks that scientist should have the liberty to do whatever they want in the name of science progress, other thinks that scientists’ studies should be structured. To me, scientist’s freedom of experiment should be limited because of ethic issues and in a concern of effectiveness.
First, Scientific’s studies should be ethically acceptable. Actually, if an experiment will harm the subject (humans and animals) psychologically or physically, the study must not continue. Humans and animals are living, they have dignity. In this respect, you can not treat them as laboratory objects. For instance, if a scientist want to be sure and precise about the psychological factor that influence our life, he can make a psychological experiment on babies. Nevertheless, it will be completely unethical to reproduce abandon on purpose to a baby and see him growing, just to measure the effect.
Second, if scientists can conduct whatever studies they want, studies risk to not be efficient. In other words, if scientist on a same field do not agree on a couple of specific experiment to do there will be not enough financial support to maintain all of them, especially if there is no need. For example, if there is a need to experiment on Ebola disease but none scientist want to study on it, people are going to die because this disease is spreading now. Furthermore, there will not be enough money to conduct the experiment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, thus, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 258.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20930232558 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22766532468 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565891472868 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2921877313 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380382866097 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126017177682 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885056696917 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259429101441 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547106632671 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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