People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
In this busy society, people like to do something comfortable other than work to relax. Some people like reading, others like listening to music. For my part, I like doing some exercises to chase away my stress.
In the beginning, I didn't like to exercise at all, not to mention doing it after work. However, some of my friends went to the gym every weekday evening, and they often suggested I should do some exercise. I felt strange that people usually get tired after working all day, so why did they like to exercise on weekdays and make themselves more tired? I thought the best way to escape the stress of the day was laying on the sofa, watching soap operas until going to sleep.
But one day, one of my friends succeeded in persuading me. I went to the gym with her and tried some fitness equipment under her guidance. To my surprise, though my body felt exhausted, my mind felt spirited! When I was running on the treadmill, I felt like all the stress from my work was left behind. And after finishing my fitness course, I never slept so well before that day. The next day, even though I got sore muscles, I still felt full of energy.
Now, after work, I like to go to the gym for an hour. Although work makes me tired physically and mentally, after running for a little while, I become energetic again. And my body is more comfortable and healthier than before. Besides exercising in a gym on weekdays, I also like to do some outdoor exercises on the weekend, such as jogging in a park and hiking in a mountain.
In brief, if someone asks me about the best way to relax and escape the stress, I will answer "doing exercises" for sure.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Message: Did you mean 'works'?
Suggestion: works
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, still, well, while, in brief, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48026315789 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45914505277 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9444442916 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1176470588 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186284462873 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652639053366 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569518693986 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125614083892 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627981625722 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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