An Australian friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit. Write a letter to your friend In your letter
• say how you feel about the visit
• suggest what you could do on his/her birthday
• try to find out what you friend thinks of your idea
Dear Sarah,
It was a delightful surprise to hear from you after such a long time. My joy knew no bounds when I read that you are coming to visit me on your birthday. Special arrangements are made for your 25th birthday celebration.
I have planned for a road trip to the Goa for a week. We will be carrying tents, along with cooking arrangements. As you are very fond of adventures and thrilling activities, and your love for tasting different food variety, the same has been planned for the week. Your birthday will be celebrated in Goa, alongside beach and night under the stars. In the morning, surfing followed by scuba diving and other water sports. Later on, the cruise party is arranged for your birthday evening.
I will be delighted to know if there are any changes you expect for the party planner. If there is anything, you want to add to make it more memorable please let me know.
Waiting eagerly for you.
Yours lovingly,
Shreyas
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6449704142 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48736170337 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3508088464 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.3846153846 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.153846153846 4.34317383033 4% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237433848878 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875499759473 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596733248106 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155110255685 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490894594105 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.74 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.