“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree.
Although diseases have been increasing dramatically nowadays, it is too expensive to find their treatments and cure the ailments. In my opinion, thereby, emphasis should be given to preventive measures in order to keep beings away from contacting diseases and be fit and energetic.
People can prevent themselves from diseases by playing an active role in sports activities and other physical movements. They can play a plethora of sports like squash, tennis table and badminton which do not only keep them in their shape but also helps them to protect from chronicle diseases, such as, heart disease, respiratory problems and hypertension. Despite playing and participating in sports, people, especially, senior citizens can do walk, yoga, meditation and simple laughter exercises. It will also help them to prevent any severe diseases. As a result, if people do some physical movements and remain active, it will make them more robust and give the energy to tackle some health issues.
Moving further, they should be more attentive to their health problems. If they find any issue with their health, they should instantly concern with the specialist practitioner. They should follow proper treatment and complete course of medication to ensure that it does not harm in the future. For example, people are getting a headache generally in their life. Still, they do not bother to go to the doctor and know about the reason for having a headache, they just simply take a tablet which might harm to their mental and physical health. Consequentely, to update with the health issues is the best way to protect from severe diseases.
In conclusion, even though the technology has been evolved to a considerable extent which allows us to find a treatment of maximum diseases in this scientific era, but it is better to protect oneself by participating in sports and other activities and consult to a doctor on a timely basis in terms of update about all fluctuations of physical and mental health.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125382263 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7421116454 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56880733945 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5016006235 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.714285714 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129104672654 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437555580405 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479348179328 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898232406661 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652640164379 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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