Some people think that having set retirement age(e.g. 65 Years) for everybody, regardless of occupation is unfair. They believe that certain workers desire to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. 67
After graduation and tirelessly dedicated working for many years, one gets paid pension after retirement from the government. However, as per norms person is eligible for a grant after 65 years of age which is quite fascinating, when we consider the determined on-field job or maybe a working place which is life-threatening or dangerous they deserve to get early retirement.
Certain duties require a lot more than just hardworking physique and attention but also the determination to keep going and working fearlessly for the sake of the nation. For example, the soldiers who are allocated at dense places for years and years, staying away from home can result in mental fatigue and also their family life gets no attention. In Indian military services in such cases, the early retirement is provided, which is unbiased and deservedly. The pilots of both aeroplane, as well as superfast trains, require long duration concentration and critical thinking in the situation. After a certain age, the sighting can reduce, which can result in a fatal accident detrimental to the loss of many lives. We must consider sailours as well.
There are certain industries in the society which expect their employees to never to make a mistake in any case. If we consider an engineer working in a refinery one has to be on toes to fulfil his duties, a slight negligence can prove in a vital accident. In India every year, there are more than ten such cases of fires in various refineries across the country, cause of mental fatigue of the working individual. The long working hours of miners should also be considered as its detesting as age increases. These working conditions are also not good for the body for a long time. Gases from refineries and soil from mining regions are contributing to the lung diseases as well.
The policymakers should understand such critical condition of the duties and set the retirement age as aforementioned, which will also enhance the number of applicants for such jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'norms'' or 'norm's'?
Suggestion: norms'; norm's
...nt from the government. However, as per norms person is eligible for a grant after 65...
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Line 2, column 491, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...servedly. The pilots of both aeroplane, as well as superfast trains, require long duration...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, as to, for example, as well as, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8166663425 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564564564565 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0015999744 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164782789931 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525045453607 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382128253763 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111602903476 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291740784217 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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