You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager.
In your letter,
describe the training course you want to do
explain what the company could do to help you
say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Mr Saikumar
I have recently come across an advertisement for an ANSYS Training course which has an extensive curriculum, and its application is comprehensive in our sector. Since it is a webinar, the institute is offering at a reasonable cost than its marked price. Additionally, they are offering a ten percent discount for signing up early, that is before the 12th of October.
The company can sponsor me on this course, as I am working on a crucial project related to Nuclear Energy. It is quite evident that gaining this skill will assist us adequately in solving multiple problems. We have the licenses version of this software, but we are not capable of using all its features. The latest version is not only adroit in working, but also less time-consuming in analysing the product. On learning this software, I can train the other design engineers as well.
Since we design engineers have to scrutinise the product by testing on softwares and then modifying it as per the results. This software has advanced features which can evaluate multiple problems simultaneously saving us more time. Furthermore, the nuclear project which we are working on needs to be examined very carefully, a small error can prove fatal to our company.
I am looking forward to your approval.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'licenses'' or 'license's'?
Suggestion: licenses'; license's
... solving multiple problems. We have the licenses version of this software, but we are no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04109589041 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89777028446 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648401826484 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7674605303 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9230769231 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177909619994 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539707047802 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588903008666 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944009380403 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05496885956 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 41.2886597938 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.