Both the reading passage and the lecture argues the idea of sending humans to Mars. With this in mind, the author states that there are several problems which could be solved in this project. On the othe hand, the lecturer claims that although this project is challenging, there are several solution for all the problems that mentioned in the passage.
First of all, the writer points the view that it takes aproximately two years to go to Mars and back. Therefore, it is not easy to carry enough food, water, and oxygen because of limited capicity of space vehicles. The professor makes it clear that astronauts can use hydroponic technique to cultivate food crops on space with need less space. Moreove, in this maner some amount of water and released oxygen will be produced to meet the astronauts needed.
Second, the writing material argues the problem of zero-gravity environment of space and its negative effects on humans body. However, the speaker explains that there are several techniques which can help to astronauts to maintain their health in zero- gravity environment. For instance, there are some regular exercise which prevent decreas of muscle mass and also using some mineral to compensation reduction of bone density.
Finally, while the writer explains tremendous amount of space radiation in Mars would be dangerous for astronauts and the lack of magnetic field in Mars to protect people from solar radiation, the professor contradicts this idea. She makes it clear that the dangerous level of radiation in Mars does not exist in all the time. Furthermore, there are some equipment to help astronauts to be safe untile dangerous times pass.
Both the reading passage and the lecture argues the idea of sending humans to mars. With this in mind, the author states that there are several problems which could be solved in this project. On the othe hand, the lecturer claims that although this project is challenging, there are several solution for all the problems that mentioned in the passage.
First of all, the writer points the view that it takes aproximately two years to go to mars and back. Therefore, it is not easy to carry enough food, water, and oxygen because of limited capicity of space vehicles. The professor makes it clear that astronauts can use hydroponic technique to cultivate food crops on space with need less space. Moreove, in this maner some amount of water and released oxygen will be produced to meet the astronauts needed.
Second, the writing material argues the problem of zero-gravity environment of space and its negative effects on humans body. However, the speaker explains that there are several techniques which can help to astronauts to maintain their health in zero- gravity environment. For instance, there are some regular exercise which prevent decreas of muscle mass and also using some mineral to compensation reduction of bone density.
Finally, while the writer explains tremendous amount of space radiation in mars would be dangerous for astronauts and the lack of magnetic field in mars to protect people from solar radiation, the professor contradicts this idea. She makes it clear that the dangerous level of radiation in mars does not exist in all the time. Furthermore, there are some equipment to help astronauts to be safe untile dangerous times pass.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'several solutions'.
Suggestion: several solutions
... this project is challenging, there are several solution for all the problems that mentioned in ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'mar'.
Suggestion: mar
...t takes aproximately two years to go to mars and back. Therefore, it is not easy to ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 937.175257732 150% => OK
No of words: 274.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13503649635 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55098785319 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565693430657 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 290.88556701 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.1305070826 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 4.34317383033 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365661901945 0.216113520407 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134697902948 0.0766984524023 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187998892446 0.0603063233224 312% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258363273428 0.12726935374 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.335486858714 0.0580467560999 578% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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