A close friend is coming to visit you he/she has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area.
- Write a letter to your friend . In your letter ask more details about your friend's plans.
- Suggest some places to visit and things to do in your hometown.
- Tell your friend about food or drink he/she should try during his/her stay.
Dear Shima
I hope you and your families are very well. I have very excited when I have heard you are visiting my hometown. Therefore, I have decided to write to inform you about some information that may be necessary for your journey.
Please, let me know about your arrival details and length of stay so that I can schedule accordingly.
Generally speaking, it is very great time for visiting Büyükada due to weather is pleasant and is the best season for cycling. The car exhibition, also, will held on the weekend about 3 days and all of car brands coming in this event from all over the world. Actually, you can benefit from easy access to the newest version of automobiles in this fair.
However, I have planned for swimming in the special pool in the city. This pool is four seasons with a big Jacuzzi that is unique in Asia. After that, I tend to familiar you with a suspended restaurant in my hometown that we can have dinner in this location. I believe that this can be a particular experience for you. I promise you this travel will be memorable for you.
Please, write me back soon, looking forward to welcome you.
Best Regards,
Mans
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 159, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'hold'
Suggestion: hold
...cycling. The car exhibition, also, will held on the weekend about 3 days and all of ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 303, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the newest'.
Suggestion: to the newest
...ually, you can benefit from easy access to newest version of automobiles in this fair. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 86, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'season' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'seasons'.
Suggestion: seasons
...pecial pool in the city. This pool is 4 season with a big Jacuzzi that is unique in As...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, however, look, may, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62801932367 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45902736089 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589371980676 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8000770118 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4285714286 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7857142857 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232163131542 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806244556327 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058670817966 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126282420442 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061882673956 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.