During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a business man who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
• Remind him when and where you met
• Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
• Say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr.Smith,
I am writing this letter in regards to taking up your job offer as a marketing manager at one of your restaurants.
We met last month, more specifically on the flight from Skopje to Rome on 13th March. We sat next to each other and we were talking about restaurants in general and how their popularity can increase. At that particular moment you told me that you ran a chain of restaurants in Europe and invited me to be part of your marketing team.
I would like to express my interest for this job position and I am sure that I have the right qualifications. I have been working as marketing manager in food industry for 7 years. My resume, copy of my master degree in economics and
recommendations of my previous employers as well, are attached in this email. If the job position is still available, would you please look at it.
I am looking forward to your response and I would appreciate the opportunity to be part of your workforce.
Yours sincerely,
Ivana Krstevska
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Smith
Dear Mr.Smith, I am writing this letter in regards...
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Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...r Mr.Smith, I am writing this letter in regards to taking up your job offer as a marketing...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ere talking about restaurants in general and how their popularity can increase. A...
^^
Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...opy of my master degree in economics and recommendations of my previous employers...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, still, well, in general, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69101123596 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86424858551 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623595505618 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7105660624 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191771561399 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645881825308 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057624183509 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989885892137 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620591796105 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.