Dear Paul,
I am writing to let you remind that last week we travelled in the same flight from Kolkata to Bangalore. Do you remember you asked me to contact you for a potential job opportunity in one of your self owned restaurant chains?
Let me explain you my job interests in detail. I am a passionate cook who appreciates and cook delicious delicacies. Cooking food and feeding people is one of the most noble profession and I aspire to become one. My love and excitement of being a chef is incomparable. I aspire to have a job as a head chef in one of your chains.
I have got 2 years of experience being a chef in multiple renowned restaurants. Currently I am working as a chef in Monday Blues. Besides doing my expected jobs, I support my chef team while head chef is not available. Being a nationally recognized chef and a happily accepted chef in many renowned restaurants , I feel that I possess all the qualities need in a head chef.
I will wait for your reply
Yours faithfully,
Sumit Das
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 312, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cepted chef in many renowned restaurants , I feel that I possess all the qualities...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 833.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52717391304 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81669861511 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592391304348 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.066229207 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4166666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166986342353 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624452835975 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816937220562 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105412172745 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951942572659 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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