People are getting habituated spending more time working rather than having some leisure activities. They keep on missing many precious moments while running behind the work with thought of getting early success and wealth. In my opinion, committed to the job that someone is doing is important, but making time to do some spare activities is more important to keep the person happy and healthy. extensive hours
The biggest advantages of doing some free time activities with family and friends is that it gives you immense motivation to go back to work the next time. Nobody wants to work without a purpose, and setting some goals for your family or may be sometimes for yourself gives the push to achieve them. For example, after a trip to a island for couple of days recently makes rejuvenated me and my family. One should not for to spent quality time on their day to day life while working for extensive hours.
Working for long hours sometimes if required to meet the job target, but should not be a habit. People spend long hours in office and takes more work load to keep their supervisor happy and sometimes achieving the next promotion in a short time. For example, marketing employees mainly work on target basis, the sooner they reach the point the better to for the them. But it is being observed that still employee haunts for extra miles, leaving behind all the time they could have spend for some leisure activities like going out with family, enjoying with friends etc. Driving yourself behind the goals is good, but make sure that your goals are not driving you back.
In conclusion, working for extra hours may be good in some situation but do not sacrifice your personal time for the shake of it. Have enough time to spend for yourself, family and friends to keep yourself joyful and moving. Hereby I believe that spending more hours in workplace and less for other activities has some advantages but can not override the number of disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 397, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Extensive
...t to keep the person happy and healthy. extensive hours The biggest advantages of doin...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ieve them. For example, after a trip to a island for couple of days recently make...
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Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
... they reach the point the better to for the them. But it is being observed that still em...
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Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...ing behind all the time they could have spend for some leisure activities like going ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79472140762 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32560749477 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507331378299 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7574249429 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319551723268 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115691071098 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633415102335 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208538481636 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218610540264 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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