During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter,
- Remind him when and where you met
- Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
- Say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Sir,
Hope you have reached your home safely. I am writing to you regarding our conversation about a job opportunity at your restaurant. To be more specific, I was sitting on the window seat next to you on Jet Airways flight to Mumbai on 22nd March 2020.
I remember you mentioned your recent restaurant which was opened in the Bandra Kurla Complex area. Since it is newly opened, you are in search of hotel staff including the Staff Manager position. I gave a serious thought about this role along with the responsibilities and the expectations which you elaborated in detail throughout the journey.
Therefore, I would very much like to apply for this position. Furthermore, I would like to point out that I already have past experience in this field.
I have managed a team of 5-7 members for a period of 10 months. My skills included looking after the timely management of various activities of the hotel and checking on the food quality. Additionally, addressing the customers politely and in a presentable manner. I would be elated if I am given a chance to put forward my talent for this job.
Looking forward to a positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Dimple Patel
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...d like to point out that I already have past experience in this field. I have managed a team ...
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Line 8, column 241, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a presentable manner" with adverb for "presentable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
..., addressing the customers politely and in a presentable manner. I would be elated if I am given a chan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, regarding, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89162561576 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87298985601 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645320197044 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6340684344 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9285714286 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204522746195 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609970911114 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599134697317 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090362178536 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899920455813 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.