We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business,
hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the
future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious
of their benefits?
Undoubtedly, in this technology-driven contemporary era, computers have inevitably invaded us. Right from its usage in the medical
field to criminal investigation or even at airports, it is difficult to spend even a single day without the usage of these AI
tools. This essay will elucidate the usage of computers in the near future. In addition, we will discuss how this dependency will have adverse effects on our society.
To begin with, computers can be of huge advantage in online education. Nowadays, there are copious courses available on the web through
just one click. This is in fact made the world really small and concise. For instance, a professor sitting in London can conduct
his teaching though video and audio apps such as Zoom, Google Meet, etc. for students of India, China, Singapore, or the United States.
Furthermore, these battery driven robots have created a revolution by even conducting complex surgeries with minimal or no human support.
In fact, these marvelous inventions are even assisting in performing daily chores like robot maids can finish cleaning entire house in a
couple of hours. Thus, it is clearly seen that computers can be foreseen in teaching, medical field and household work in the future.
On the contrary, incessant use of these tools can have detrimental effects. First of all, computers have replaced humans in numerous fields due to which unemployment has cropped up and humans have lost their jobs to computers. This in turn adversely affects the economy of the nation. Moreover, the discipline and attention paid on children's activities cannot match that of an AI robot.
For example, a computer can present notes and take up daily lessons of students but it cannot make any adjustments in it's teaching pattern or pace based on the pupil's learning abilities. In other words, the social and economic development of the country is hindered
if there is over-dependence on these technologies.
To conclude, it can be seen that despite computers reducing human efforts for performing the various tasks it's utilization should be in
limits. Adequate awareness should be spread among people regarding its side-effects else there is not much time left that these robots
can completely take over our lives in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, first of all, in other words, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21409214092 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80703345957 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617886178862 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5252934969 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.45 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173285598727 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515159105838 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470030872217 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0578149729873 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504056919334 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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