Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Children's upbringing methods have always been a debatable topic among parents. While some people will opine that children brought up in families deficit of money have better values of facing any difficulties in life, many others believe that children growing
in wealthier families are better brought up. This essay will discuss why I completely agree with this proposition that children are better brought up in poorer families as against rich families.
Firstly, children who are born and raised in families who have to struggle much to earn their daily bread, are those who have already faced a lot of problems and hardships throughout their lifetime right from the time of birth. Therefore, such children are better prepared to face any situation that life unfolds in front of them. If the same situation is brought in front of a destined child, due to his inexperience, he will fail to find his way out of it. In fact, a recent study reveals that 67% of the high scorers of board exams are students who have done self-study and whose parents are daily wage earners or have low family income. This proves that
poor students can face any situation as compared to rich kids.
Moreover, poor kids value little things in life and hence can go to any extent to fight for it. On the other hand, since rich kids
are lucky to have everything they want in life, they are reckless and have a laid back attitude towards their goals. Take an example
of the current CEO of Google, Mr. Sunder Pichai. He was born in a family where his father was a truck driver and mother a
housemaker. But this did not deter him from achieving his goals in life. He worked hard to fulfill all his dreams despite his family's rugged condition. This confirms that poor children go the extra mile in order to make a name in this world against the
rich children.
This essay discussed why rich kids lack the ability to face difficulties when compared with poor kids due to lack of experience in facing similar situations in life and not acknowledging the importance of little things in life. In my opinion, I completely agree with the proposition that children born in poor families are ready to face any situation better than children of rich families.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76606683805 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4215201469 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521850899743 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1100623805 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.058823529 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8823529412 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17647058824 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288117328793 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877419758306 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898015357155 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109951192086 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996388653507 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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