On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter :
describe the item you lost
explain how you lost item
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I have lost my gold chain during my travel to Singapore last week. It is a 24-carat gold chain, which costs around 75000 rupees. It was brand new and was given to me by my mother-in-law. I hope you will give me the insured sum for this chain. In advance, I had bought travel insurance from your company.
Let me explain more about the incident where I lost the chain. Throughout the trip, between 10th August to 16th August, I was wearing this chain.It was the last day of the holiday when we had to check out from the hotel room and I was packing my stuff, I would have accidentally left the chain in the bathroom. Moreover, I even tried contacting the hotel staff, however, sadly, they cannot find it.
Fortunately, prior to the trip, I had paid for the travel insurance for any of such unforeseen incidents. As per the policies of your company, I am liable to get at least 75% of the cost of the lost item if I have the bill invoice. Therefore, I would request you to kindly return me the amount for my lost item. Attached is a copy of the invoice of the chain along with the details of the insurance number for my policy.
Let me know if any more information is required from my end. Looking forward to your positive reply.
Yours faithfully,
Dimple Patel
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...o 16th August, I was wearing this chain.It was the last day of the holiday when we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, therefore, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40243902439 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42186716082 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0422047591 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241851734605 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831000970415 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767196582952 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136750525763 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956017650967 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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