You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house.
Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was inside it.
Make some suggestions about how to get it back
Dear Nirali,
Thank you so much for hosting me at your place last weekend. It was indeed a fun time with an abundance of memories to cherish for the future. I reached my place today morning. I hope you will be able to join me someday for another fun-filled day.
After coming home, while unpacking, I realized that my coat was left at your place. I reckon it must be left hanging on the coat hanger. It is a dark brown fur coat. Furthermore, it has multiple pockets, from which the inner pocket contains some of my very important belongings such as my wallet, which even has my driving license. Somehow, I was able to drive back home without any traffic police inquiry. However, it is quite important for me to have it back as early as possible as it is very detrimental to drive without a driving license.
My brother will be traveling to your town tomorrow at his office conference. I have provided him your address so that he can have a pitstop at your place. Please could you handover my coat to him. In case, you find any difficulty in recognizing the coat do give me a call and I can guide you with the details.
Anyways, thanks for a wonderful weekend and hope to see you soon.
Regards,
Dimple Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
...rish for the future. I reached my place today morning. I hope you will be able to join me som...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, furthermore, however, if, so, while, i reckon, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46875 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44424025564 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598214285714 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9830514391 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5625 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291822958215 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952560423693 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806543475223 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176353641199 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853437101154 0.0580467560999 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.