*You have a friend who lives in a city* abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the
colleges in this city.
Write to your friend explaining
✔️what you would like to do.
✔️Tell him/her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years and
✔️ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.
Dear Bhushan,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. You would be happy to hear that I have decided to shift to your city by applying for a Masters's degree in the Artificial Intelligence course. I hope you will be able to provide me appropriate help.
As you are aware, I always had a curiosity to dig deep into the AI sector. Currently, I am working as a Software Engineer at Morgan Stanley after graduating with a bachelor's in Computer Science. My core responsibilities include the development of websites and automating the entire process. However, my work has become very monotonous and I want to explore more on the AI front. I have heard that there are multiple universities in Los Angeles that provide this course.
I would really appreciate it if you could help me with the details and contact information of the institutions in your area. If possible, please could you personally go and talk to professors or the admin department about this course. I hardly know anyone there and it would be really useful to gain advice from them.
Looking forward to your response.
Regards,
Dimple
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bachelor' or simply 'bachelors'?
Suggestion: a bachelor; bachelors
...at Morgan Stanley after graduating with a bachelors in Computer Science. My core responsibi...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lly useful to gain advice from them. Looking forward to your response. Reg...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85863874346 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82229548896 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65445026178 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5979443245 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284037746745 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823190660072 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737629472618 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148770701194 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979760645836 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.