You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write to your friend and:
explain what you would like to do
tell them what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years
ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.
Dear Emma,
It’s been a long time. I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to know more details about the User Interface and User Experience Design course at the colleges in Vancouver. I plan to choose the best college for this course.
As you know, I have been working as a website designer in a technology software company in New Westminster for one year. My duties are analyzing a new idea, searching user experiences and creating all of the digital sketches. As my leader is highly pleased with my performance, he asked me to learn advanced knowledge in the user experience field to take a manager position. So I would like to join a connected UX designing course in Vancouver for a few months.
I would like to ask your help with the details of the appropriate institution with the contact number. Perhaps you could send me their catalogues of these programs. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thanks for your help.
Jane
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gn course at the colleges in Vancouver. I plan to choose the best college for thi...
^
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...searching user experiences and creating all of the digital sketches. As my leader is highl...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68047337278 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6546887371 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656804733728 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0148783171 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9166666667 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0833333333 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248242863269 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882081911732 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761079846236 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163116051572 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224629371463 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.