You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write to your friend
• explain what you like to do
• explain what kind of work or studies you have been tloing for the past few years
• ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution..
My dear friend
Hello. How are you? What`s up nowedays? I`m sorry I have`t written because of training my study and I would like to apply to do a course at one of the college in the city. So I advise you which You also study together with me. Because You know English, understand texnics and lessons will be the English language. You learn to repair cars and to make them in the college. After college, you can enter at the Mechanical Institute.
You think my proposal and dicide for study. I am sure you manage it and you try for the future. It may be a big chance for you. If you want to study that I ask you for assistance in contacting an appropriate institutition. If there is anything else I can do, just let me know.
Please write soon your answer
Your friend. Ali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
My dear friend Hello. How are you? What's up nowe...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hance for you. If you want to study that I ask you for assistance in contacting a...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 645.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38775510204 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54305331863 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69387755102 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3860640223 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 46.0714285714 76.5299724578 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.5 16.8248392259 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.473254225355 0.216113520407 219% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153720547545 0.0766984524023 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720979085528 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250342768505 0.12726935374 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138292130487 0.0580467560999 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.5 8.37731958763 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.7 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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