You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course at a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish.
Write a letter to the admission tutor. In your letter
explain your position
apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day
also ask how long the interview will be, and whether there will be any tests during it
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have received your invitation for an interview on 16th September 2020 at 11.30 in the morning for finalizing my admission seat for an MBA degree at your prestigious college. I feel honored and fortunate to have this opportunity to showcase my skills. Unfortunately, I cannot make it at the specified time due to my work commitments.
I am currently employed at a multinational company for the last 4 years. On 16th September we have a training session from morning 10 am to evening 6 pm. This session I cannot skip as I am the one who is going to deliver this learning class to new joiners of my company. Thus, it is very important for me to be present on this day in that location.
Please accept my sincere apology for the inconvenience caused due to sudden change. However, if possible, please could you arrange for another day for my interview. I would be ok with any other day which is convenient for you. Meanwhile, if you could update me with the number of rounds along with the duration of each. Also, if there will be any tests for which I have to come prepared.
I am looking to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Dimple Patel
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, thus, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58962264151 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76337406173 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6585762788 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242929623219 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774823651306 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613747378063 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132525097018 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804144003892 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.