A friend has asked you to babysit on Saturday and wants to know how much charge per hour for this. Unfortunately, you already have a commitment this weekend and cannot help. However, you free the following weekend.
Write a letter to your friend explaining that you are not able to help this time, but could help later. Explain also what your fee for the service is.
Dear Tania,
Hope you are doing fine. I was elated when you asked me to babysit your daughter Jiyaana. She is such a cute and adorable child and I love spending time with her. However, I am afraid that I will not be able to devote time this Saturday.
Let me elaborate more, usually my entire week schedule is booked a week in advance. Hence for this week, which is till Saturday, all the days have been reserved for some of the other kids. Despite, checking multiple times, I am sorry to say that I cannot adjust this week. However, I can surely take your booking for next week. I have free time on Monday, Wednesday, and Friday in the upcoming week.
Furthermore, as you are aware the last time I charged 20 dollars per hour and this price remains the same even now. Please let me know in advance how many hours you need me to book my calendar for Jiyaana, accordingly I will take other kids. Additionally, if you require more than 8 hours you can let me know.
Looking forward to your reply.
Regards,
Dimple
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...k schedule is booked a week in advance. Hence for this week, which is till Saturday, ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ay, all the days have been reserved for some of the other kids. Despite, checking multiple ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47340425532 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26809783039 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670212765957 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6676316437 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.6923076923 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271184896948 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086418623692 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652443947427 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144616827779 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784993868438 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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