Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this competitive era, sports advertising is considered the best way of marketing products. Some people opine that it is the best medium to reach a larger audience, while others argue that it has negative effects. In this essay, I will elucidate both points of view and say why I believe that it has more positives than disadvantages.
To begin with, the sports industry is a lucrative field around the globe, where companies promote and publicize their products. Therefore, it provides an excellent platform to increase sales and bring profit to the table. For instance, numerous companies fund and sponsor various cricket matches with the intention to gain huge returns. Moreover, sportspersons and their team also benefit, in terms of monetary gains and popularity by participating in these adverts. Additionally, it also results in an improvement in their overall performance on the field.
On the other hand, there are certain cons for this. First of all, these advertisements have a negative influence on the citizens in terms of reckless buying of items, which are not the need of the hour. Consequently, it leads to wastage of one's hard-earned money by investing in copious brands. As an illustration, people following the footsteps of their role models like Roger Federer or Mahindra Singh Dhoni, if they see them featuring in ads endorsing footwear or apparel, youngsters tend to impulsively buy the same products. Hence, careful monitoring by parents and stringent screening of adverts from the government is required.
To conclude, even though there are certain drawbacks to these sports advertisements, overall positives outnumber the negatives. In my opinion, these commercials are beneficial for the overall economy and boosting businesses if done effectively without adapting to wrong methods such as corruption and bribery.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38620689655 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00316915446 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.639190941 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.133333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139764862061 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391481120601 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445838730867 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782256514458 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656994800637 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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