A lot of companies are sponsoring events like sports and the players as well in order to market their products. Many people opine that it is good to sponsor such event as both the company and the player is benefited, however others think that such sponsorship ruins the game and rather focuses more on the marketed product. I believe, sponsoring a sport event, have many benefits and the disadvantages can be overlooked.
The people who are against the sponsorship of a sport event by a company thinks that, it will change the focus of people from the game to the product that is advertised. They often argue that, companies that promotes their product through such events clouds the viewers mind with their fancy advertisement. Also, when a famous star is promoting a product it attracts a lot of young crowd towards that particular item. For instance, when a famous cricketer M.S. Dhoni starred in an advertisement of Oppo phones, the company faced huge sale of their product right after that advertisement.
On the other hand, when a company sponsors a sport or a sports person, a lot of financial issues are tackled that are otherwise a big issue. A player is provided with a better sport equipment and an opportunity to play in a state or a national team. Sponsoring an event will also draw the attention of the locals to participate and be a part of such event. Also,the company will be able to advertise their product at a national level and it can bring in a lot of customers by spreading awareness of their items. Apart from this, when a big and famous company sponsors a sport or a star, it gets a lot of attention from the viewers. In India, one of the leading company sponsored a sport named Kabbadi which was outdated, but due to their sponorship it had brought a million of viewers together.
In conclusion, even though some think that advertisements diverts viewers mind, I believe that the advantages that are brought by sponsoring a sport event are lot more fruitful and helps to generate sportsmanship among individual. Also, not only sport or a sportsman is benefited, the company can also attract lot of customer by such big sponsorship.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...d, when a company sponsors a sport or a sports person, a lot of financial issues are t...
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...cipate and be a part of such event. Also,the company will be able to advertise their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78933333333 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77461508842 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485333333333 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.4285773293 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.733333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272084299734 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102168203863 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608079334 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182338066905 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358964978196 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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