Dear Mr. Khatri,
How are you? I hope you and your family are fine. We had met last week in the flight while travelling to New York via British Airways. I was your neighbour on the plane and we had a great discussion throughout our flight where you suggested me to apply for a job at one of your restaurants. I would be more than happy to come and visit you in this regard
While you are aware that I am pursuing hotel management as a career, working in your restaurant would give me an amazing opportunity as your company deals with world-class cuisines and is popular globally. I am keen on applying as a trainee for a year to gain as much knowledge as possible and further be able to support you as a permanent staff. This opportunity will be of utmost importance for my experience and development.
I believe, that my enthusiasm and openness to learning new things will benefit you and your company to achieve great potentials. I assure you that you will not regret giving me this chance and I will put forward my best to this opportunity.
I will look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Nikita Peer
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...forward my best to this opportunity. I will look forward to hearing from you. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55882352941 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6848428989 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4027650865 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5454545455 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23579330374 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938807258691 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526985215556 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143145124077 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387421771011 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.