During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman.
In your letter,
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ..................,
Dear Sir,
I am Mr Shreyas Parab, was sitting adjacent to you while flying back to Mumbai from Raipur on 20th October 2020. As you said, you own a chain of Barbeque restaurant, which is quite famous all across Mumbai for its special discount, interior and events. Also, you are looking for the manager for one of your restaurant at Dahisar, I would like to be one of the applicant for the same vacant position.
I am looking for a challenging environment to work at. I have noticed many a times the restaurant at Dahisar becomes so chaotic on weekends, that it becomes difficult to manage customers as well the staff to fulfil their orders. Even more, if there is an event scheduled, the crowd can be difficult to handle; which intrigues me more to face the situation and leave a customer on a happy note. And also as this place is close to my apartment, working late night will not be problematic to me.
I have completed my Hotel Management course from Viva Institute of Hotel Management in Mumbai. I have 8 years of experience in the hotel industry. Currently, I am working as an Assistant Manager at the Taj Hotel for 4 years, working calmly and patiently is what my boss admires me about. Moreover, I was prized for the best performance at the Taj Hotel for three consecutive years.
You can reach me at parabsh@gmail.com and I am also attaching the copy of letters of recommendation for your reference. Looking forward to hearing back from you.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...ronment to work at. I have noticed many a times the restaurant at Dahisar becomes so ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69961977186 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79443624324 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6753024955 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2857142857 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129471326086 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467377440732 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517186571986 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912329340714 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754022157174 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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