Dear Mr Joseph,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I hope you remember the unexpected encounter and conversation that we had inside the flight on the way to Australia last week. You gave me insight knowledge on your perspective regarding business in general and offered me an opportunity to join in any of the restaurant franchise in Australia owned by you as an employee.
I did an in-depth analysis about your company and came into a conclusion that instead of working in a single restaurant, I would like to accompany you as your executive secretary. This will be a great learning opportunity for my professional growth as you are the most resourceful person I have ever met.
I believe that I am a suitable candidate for this job as I have five years of experience as executive secretary in hospitality industry. Apart from this, I have various international achievements in my name within this short career time. Hence, I will be able to contribute very much to your company’s development.
I request you to kindly me for this job and looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Ms Sruthy
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, look, regarding, so, apart from, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88082901554 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00130176594 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632124352332 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0531344564 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238494654991 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891864414707 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568573463319 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146328993514 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597009424156 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.