Essay topics: Essay topics: Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter,A) Introduce yourselfB) Explain what the problem isC) Suggest solutions

Essay topics:

Essay topics: Essay topics: Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.

Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter,

A) Introduce yourself
B) Explain what the problem is
C) Suggest solutions

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am A T M Jakir Alam and I am a resident of South Banasree area. I am writing to put an official complaint regarding the construction work which is going on in my resident's vicinity.

My home is located just in the intersecting corner of road 5 and Madani avenue. The construction work of replacing the former damaged drainage has been continuing for last 15 days which creates unbearable noise, especially from the excavator and brick-breaking machine. To make the matter worse, the construction team works in two shifts including night till 10 pm, resulting in a poor concentration of the kids for their daily study. Moreover, the clouds of dust created by road maintenance are negatively affecting the health of the residents, and causing different respiratory disorders.

In this circumstance, I would like to request you to send an investigation team to measure the noise level and necessary measures which can be taken to reduce sound pollution. You are also requested to complete the work as early as possible to minimize the local sufferings.

I look forward to the problem being resolved.

Yours faithfully

A T M Jakir Alam

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01538461538 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07741021785 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676923076923 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5640378559 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106849421071 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432822401435 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400680924154 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613343809179 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039114106206 0.0580467560999 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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