The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are livingWrite a letter to the editor of the local newspaper:- Where did you hear this news and your opinion?- The reason why you protest it- Make suggestion

Essay topics:

The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are livingWrite a letter to the editor of the local newspaper:- Where did you hear this news and your opinion?- The reason why you protest it- Make suggestion

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am a resident of South Banasree street and I am writing this letter to express my deep concern about the multistoried building cum shoping mall which is being built by the local authority of Dhaka North city corporation in place of the local play ground. I came to know this news from an esteemed news TV channel.

To begin with, all the senior citizens of this area are anxious and, logically, against the construction for several legitimate reasons. Firstly, most of the kids from middle-class family spend their time here to shape their health by playing cricket, football, hockey etc. Moreover, the middle-aged persons also pass a great deal of their free time by jogging and other forms of free-hand exercise. Also, different cultural events are also being arranged by the local residents in several occations like Eid prayer of muslim community, Puja of hindu locality and so on.

Therefore, by considering the importance of all the activities which are being held here requested to convey a news article on this trouble which might seek the attention of the governmental body.

Looking for promp action from your end.

Yours sincerely
A T M Jakir Alam

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02010050251 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62380860712 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693467336683 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.7164186098 44.8134815571 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 4.34317383033 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118474384162 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434138172134 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355341832439 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630434240893 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464053256635 0.0580467560999 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 8.37731958763 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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